Premium Content (Yearly): Draft NN4 – Chapter 21

Also, I want to highlight something weird that I’ve been doing the last couple of books. My chapters have gotten longer. Before 2020, I did a good job of consistently averaging 2,000 words per chapter. However, Dysfunctional Dreams, Buried Dreams, and this book average 3,000 words per chapter. It isn’t a huge deal except it shortens the number of chapters shown in the TOC and a few people have asked if my books are getting shorter because they don’t have as many chapters. My books aren’t getting shorter, they are actually getting longer – this draft was 100,456 words when I gave up on it. The replacement also has fewer chapters with just 26 chapters and 90,000 words.

Premium Content (Monthly): Draft NN4 – Chapter 21

Also, I want to highlight something weird that I’ve been doing the last couple of books. My chapters have gotten longer. Before 2020, I did a good job of consistently averaging 2,000 words per chapter. However, Dysfunctional Dreams, Buried Dreams, and this book average 3,000 words per chapter. It isn’t a huge deal except it shortens the number of chapters shown in the TOC and a few people have asked if my books are getting shorter because they don’t have as many chapters. My books aren’t getting shorter, they are actually getting longer – this draft was 100,456 words when I gave up on it. The replacement also has fewer chapters with just 26 chapters and 90,000 words.

Chapter Twenty-one

We had Cassanova’s deliver a couple of pizzas around 9 pm. I was really glad they were open late, even on Sundays. As soon as it was delivered, I used a little magic and sent it across the divide to Dantalian. I’d get the Wendy’s for him tomorrow and take it over when I went to get Umpira.

“You should also get him a 2 liter of soda.” Jerome told me as he and I shared a medium with mushrooms, black olives, sausage, and pepperoni. “Not because he gave you the names, but because he did his best to give you time frames for their arrival.”

“I know,” I sighed. Demons did not do well with time, because it didn’t matter to them. My few visits to the Stygian always felt super long, but by Earth time they were usually only ten or fifteen minutes. Once, I’d been there nearly half an hour and had watched the sky darken, which had been really pretty. There was a sun and moon, but they looked nothing like our sun and moon. I had a vague notion, the Stygian wasn’t just another plane of existence, but a completely different planet possibly in a completely different universe. I did know with absolute certainty, it was a physical place somewhere, if it wasn’t a different universe, it was at least a different solar system. It was too much like a planet to be anything else. It had land formations and geologic features, not unlike Earth. There were mountains, caves, lakes, rivers, and even an ocean. There was also a night sky, not completely unlike the one here, although I had never found a constellation in the stars that I recognized. The sun was warm, the moon was not, and sometimes, when I traveled outside in the Stygian, I brought back dirt on my shoes from there. When Aurora had gone through a Demon Box and ended up over there, she’d brought back dirt and a rock too. If it had been an artificial construct of Lucifer’s power, I wasn’t sure it would have physical remnants that could come back to Earth with me. Of course, I didn’t tell this to anyone but Jerome because most people would believe me batshit crazy and string me up for consorting with demons.

“Magda and I believe, if I can find the correct spell, and somehow get near the shadow, I can bring it back.” Jerome said.

“Yeah, I figured you could.” I nodded. “If we could anticipate when the gang would strike again or when the shadow would return to the AESPCA, we could probably get the shadow.” I said.

“Yeah,” Jerome said solemnly. “I can’t imagine being stuck in a different time dimension that made it, so I was only visible as a shadow.”

“That would suck,” I agreed. “What is that thing profilers do to narrow down the location of serial killers?” I asked.

“How the heck should I know. I don’t study serial killers.” Jerome said.

“I’ll ask Remiel tomorrow. Maybe we could use that to find some kind of pattern or connection,” I said.

“The amplifier they found outside of Wrigley Field was not like the amplifier found outside Busch. Magda believes it was put there specifically to influence the game either by a Cards fan or Cubs fan. The baseball commission is going to start sweeping for them and has asked the AESPCA to create something to help them find them.”

“Can something be created to find quartz?” I asked.

“Yes,” Jerome nodded. “There are already several devices that do it, but they are cumbersome and problematic, so they are set up only at airports. If it could be scaled down and made less pesky, they could be turned into handheld devices to sweep areas for them. Now that people know amplifiers can overwhelm the protective spells at stadiums, they will probably become more common. I suspect someone is devising one right this second to help out the Jets football team and the Boston Red Sox.” I didn’t know much about football, but during the fall Jerome occasionally watched games, he seemed to like the Chicago Bears in one division and the Kansas City Chiefs in another. He called the Chiefs plucky, they had generally struggled every game I had watched until the previous two years, when they had been good enough to win the Rose Bowl or whatever it was. I had liked baseball because it included a great deal of stats and a player could be summarized by a handful of numbers. However, watching games with Jerome, I was learning football players could also be summarized a handful of numbers. I didn’t know why I was fascinated with stats, as a general rule, I used math when I had to, but I wasn’t mesmerized by numbers like some people.

Around 10:30 our doorbell rang. It was awful late for a social call, even from my family. Jerome and I went together to answer the door. We opened it to find Principal Grace standing on our doorstep, she was dripping wet, breathing rapidly, and her eyes were too wide.

“(First Name), what is it?” I asked, taking the woman by the arms, and pulling her inside. I checked to see if it had rained at any time, but my street was bone dry.

“I need,” she gasped. “I need help, so I came here.”

“Jerome, get her coffee or something. Are you hurt?” I asked her. She shook her head.

“My husband and I went to a movie and something came after us,” she said a tear falling down her cheek.

“Where is your husband?” I asked.

“It took him.” She said and her hands started to shake.

“What took him?” I asked, trying not to be forceful, but in control. Jerome came in with a hot cup of coffee, cream and sugar floated next to him. He gave Principal Grace the coffee mug.

“A hell prince,” Principal Grace said, and the last word came out more as a wailing sob than a word.

“A hell prince took your husband?” I asked to clarify.

“Yes,” she sloshed some coffee out of the mug. It immediately disappeared from her clothes and body. “I jumped in the river and it didn’t follow me. It took several people; Jack was one of them.” My phone buzzed. Jerome turned on the TV. My phone started to ring. Then my doorbell rang. Jerome went to the door and picked up my phone along the way. The cream and sugar followed him.

“We need you!” A panicked Uriel shouted at me as he stormed into my house. “Who is this?”

“This is Jerome’s principal; she says a hell prince took her husband.”

“Belial,” Uriel said. “He appeared in a movie theater about ten minutes ago. Took several people and disappeared.” My stomach tightened into a knot at the mention of the name, and I felt the pizza want to come back up.

“How?” I asked.

“An amplifier.” Uriel said. “There was a double feature tonight at the Starlight Drive In.” I looked at Principal Grace, she was nodding her head.

“Jerome call Helia to sit with Principal Grace, you and I will go with Uriel.” I said. “Principal Grace, I will get Jack back, don’t worry.” I said. I couldn’t say what kind of condition he would be in when he returned, but I would get him back. Helia showed up before Jerome got around to calling her.

“We heard a commotion, is…” Helia stopped her eyes finding the small petite witch who was half Asian, half Caucasian.

“Sit with Principal Grace, Belial appeared at a drive in, I have to go,” I told her. We ran behind Uriel out my door.

“Fucking wings,” Uriel spat looking at me. “Let me get Azrael, we’ll fly both of you there.”

“I can get us there, if I won’t get arrested.” Jerome said.

“How?” I asked.

“Magda teleported into our house,” Jerome said as if that answered it. It didn’t, but I didn’t have time for a magic lesson from Jerome.

“If you can do it, do it, I’ll take responsibility,” Uriel said with a nod. I gave my uncle a sideways glance. I didn’t doubt Jerome could do it, I just doubted Uriel would take responsibility if the kid got into trouble for it. For a moment, I thought something had gone wrong, it felt like something had wrapped around me and yanked me forward, it was a similar sensation to traveling to the Stygian. I instinctively closed my eyes and when I opened them, I expected to see red dirt beneath my feet. Instead, I was standing on rocks. Several cars were on their sides or roofs. First responders were trying to get people out of them. Ambulance sirens screamed and the lights strobed across the buildings and the damaged movie screen.

“The amplifier was behind the screen; the movie Venom had just started when Belial came through the screen and started picking up cars. Witnesses say they thought he was looking for something. People panicked and scattered. He went after a man and woman, the woman jumped into the Mississippi River about a quarter mile from her, the man was taken by Belial. Then Belial came back and picked up more people and disappeared.” Uriel told us.

“Any idea how many he took?” I asked.

“About ten,” Uriel said. “Where did he go?”

“He went home,” I said. Fan-fucking-tabulous, I was going to have to go to the Stygian and find the people and bring them back.

“Why would a hell prince kidnap people?” Uriel asked.

“Because he could.” I said.

“To get Soleil to come to him,” Jerome said. Which had been my first thought too, but I had not intended to hear it said out loud. My second thought was this was a direct disobedience of Lucifer’s orders, and a direct challenge by extension. In the last year, I had begun to suspect Belial, Beelzebub, and Azazael were actively conspiring against the central power. However, I believed there would be unintentional consequences they weren’t planning on, like some degradation of the divide which might make it harder for demons to pass between the Stygian and Earth. Zadkiel and Jophiel had designed it while they were living breathing angels. With Zadkiel now dead, and Jophiel somewhere between alive and dead, I felt quite strongly that it was still their angelic and demonic powers that made it work as well as operating the divide which worked like a gateway. I was not sure how or what to expect if Lucifer lost control of it. But Lucifer’s status as not dead, meant that he was still using powers Belial and Beelzebub would never have access to, even if they killed Jophiel. Part of me wondered if killing Jophiel would bring him back as an even stronger ruler of the Stygian, because Lucifer would be a demon at that point. However, I wasn’t interested in testing the theory.

“We’ll need to go there and get them. We’ll need strength and numbers,” I told my uncle. “While there we can rescue Reginald Bayer and Umpira the vampire,” I said.

“What?” Uriel looked at me.

“I suspect people living in the Stygian is partly responsible for eroding Lucifer’s power over it. Reginald Bayer lives in Belial’s territory. Umpira the vampire went missing in October and I have it from a reliable source that she has set up house in Ashtaroth’s territory and that her arrival was accidental. If we are going to enter the Stygian to rescue people from Belial, then we might as well have Ashtaroth bring Umpira, and we can rescue her as well.”

“But will Ashtaroth willingly bring her?” Uriel asked, eyes narrowed. Uriel knew the least of my uncles about my recent dealings with the demons and the Stygian and he didn’t believe they could be trusted at all, which I understood.

“Yes,” I nodded confidently. If nothing else, I can command Ashtaroth to give her to me. I have less power over Azazael, so the fourth might be out of my reach. Esmeralda is also questionable. She is shacked up with Mammon and it sounds like she wants to remain there, so while I could force Mammon to bring her to me, I won’t if she truly wants to remain one of his possessions.“

“Huh,” Uriel said, and it held a great deal of emotion and meaning, mostly that he was pissed at me. But I was fine with that. “Who do you intend to take?”

“Jerome, me,” I paused. “I need strong volunteers, because if Belial decides to make it a fight, his demons will try to fight us too.”

“Can’t you just command him to give you the hostages?” Uriel asked.

“Maybe,” I shrugged. “I can and I can’t. I can command it, but Belial will fight against his own instinct to obey it.”

“It will become a contest of wills with Belial’s minions trying to distract Soleil to ensure she loses. The others will battle the demons, while Soleil matches will power with Belial.” Jerome said. “If we enter through Leviathan’s territory, Leviathan will assist us as much as he can, but Leviathan doesn’t have a great many demons to use for combat, because he doesn’t require possession to keep others afraid of him.” This was true, although I doubted most people realized it. Leviathan’s hell hounds and dragons and storm gods were far scarier than any demon could be and knowing that Leviathan had them at his disposal kept people afraid of him. I had a feeling Chaac rampaging across Lake Michigan three years ago had moved Leviathan into his position as second strongest hell prince, because before that he’d been like fourth or fifth.

Social Media Accounts & Premium Content

I’m going to issue a short statement regarding social media: I only have a couple of social media accounts: I’m on Twitter and Facebook. I also have an Instagram account, but I haven’t a clue what the password is and I don’t have the email address anymore to recover the password. These accounts are all labeled Hadena James. I AM not associated with any Twitter, Facebook, or Instagram accounts which uses a character name. For example: I am not associated with the Instagram account AislinnCain or the Twitter account Cainaislinn.

I’ve been offering premium content for close to 9 months now. And it has been riddled with issues. I went with WordPress because my only other option is Patreon. It has been fraught with problems. I originally considered ditching the concept, but a reader talked me out of it, especially after learning I have 3 or 4 partially written D&R novels that suffer the same problem as NN4: they are so messy I can’t get to the ending.

I have made a decision: In June, I am going to move Premium Content to Patreon and just accept the fees and deal with the issues associated with Patreon. When I get it up and rolling, I will share the link on my blog. I believe I know how to turn off payments being received through WordPress. However, if I can’t get it to turn off on my end, I will post the instructions on how to unsubscribe. I picked June so that none of the July or August yearly subscriptions would renew and still allow most of you to get your full year.

I do apologize for this, but I know sometimes my premium content is made available to non-subscribers on WordPress, which isn’t fair to those who pay and isn’t fair to me considering the amount of work I put into Premium Content. However, as I said this won’t happen until June. I still have to learn Patreon and I’m not going to switch in the middle of a draft release on WordPress. I will be releasing the D&R drafts I have at a later date through Premium Content. I intend to set up Patreon’s payments at the exact same levels I have them now. I know Patreon allows for yearly subscription payments as well as monthly, I just haven’t figured out how to set it up yet. There’s still a great deal of learning I need to do with Patreon.

Premium Content (Monthly): Draft NN4 – Chapter 19

Another chapter from the original draft of NN4.

Chapter Nineteen

I was glad we stayed to watch the AESPCA show up at Wrigley Stadium. It burst into flames and people stampeded for the closed exits, which had to be opened. The division of magic crimes with the help of the AESPCA tried to search everyone exiting for the first minute or so. Then they had to give up and just let people get the hell out of the stadium. The grass was burning a pure white and the soil beneath it was vitrifying. None of us said a word. When the Stygian flames reached the stadium wall, they snuffed themselves out. I sat wondering if I should do something. I could open a portal and take Jerome through the Stygian to get to Chicago in about five minutes. I could round up my uncles and have them fly us there in about half an hour. Or I could sit on my couch and send demons and command them to obey Magda Red. Or I could sit on my couch and send hell hounds to assist Magda Red. Or I could do nothing.

Ultimately, we sat on the couch and watched about three dozen witches, angels, and fairies wearing AESPCA badges try to contain the mayhem. The real problem wasn’t the Stygian Flames burning the grass. It also wasn’t the stampede; it was the magic. It was as if in the chaos, every supernatural at Wrigley had started casting spells and that magic was out of control and doing all sorts of things, I doubt it was intended to do.

“There’s another amplifier,” Jerome said. “Another large one.” Neither of us questioned how he knew that with the certainty his voice contained.

“is it possible the time spell at Busch Stadium was an accident?” I asked.

“I suppose so,” Remiel said.

“Leon Vance and Art (last name?) said they weren’t trying to cause Mr. Barn-Nagal to become possessed, they were trying to hex him into having his words appear in the air as he spoke. I don’t know that I believe them, but what if this gang was trying to cast a different spell and cast the time spells by accident?”

“If they weren’t confident with the magic they were using, it is possible. Even minor spells often go awry in the school classrooms.” Jerome said.

“What if whatever spell they are trying to cast, isn’t just one they aren’t comfortable with, but one that requires a great deal of magic. I thought earlier, they could be placing the amplifiers near Busch Stadium solely for the collection of people in attendance. The amplifier is pouring out so much extra magic from all the supernaturals, that it overwhelmed the protection spells at Busch. At which point, the time slip happened, allowing shadows of the past to appear in Busch, the things we thought were ghosts, but not ghosts.” I said.

“Shadows of the past,” Jerome said. “Maybe the time slip was the spell they meant to use. I wonder if the shadow is a person trapped in some kind of time differential? Could that be it?” Jerome asked.

“You would know more about that than us,” Remiel replied.

“I need to visit the AESPCA archive and library,” Jerome announced.

“I’ll take you,” Remiel stood up. I also stood.

“We have special permission, but we are still going to set off the possession protection spells. As his guardian, I should be there for that, especially with Magda in Chicago.” I said.

“It’s Sunday,” Remiel sighed and flopped back down on the couch.

“Are you saying the library is closed on Sundays?” I asked.

“Yes, they do a decontamination and preservation thing on Sundays. It takes twelve hours to complete, and it’s toxic for another four to five hours after that.” Remiel said.

“Fuck,” I flopped back down next to my uncle.

“Yes, it is completely impossible to visit it today under any circumstances. The process kills and mummifies even supernaturals.” Remiel told us.

“Damn,” Jerome said. “What time do they open tomorrow?”

“Six in the morning,” Remiel told him. “However, you’d be better off waiting until eight. The first two hours on Monday morning, they will hold you at the gates for hours while they reset all their alarms and spells.”

“There has to be something we can do today.” I said.

“We can look through missing persons for supernaturals,” Remiel suggested.

“Would that help?” I asked.

“If someone entered a different time dimension, surely they would be reported as missing,” Jerome said. “I wonder if black magic sacrifices in an attempt to get someone back to this time dimension could explain the murders. They all seemed mildly ritualistic, if they are done by people who don’t know what they are doing or how to do it, maybe that’s why they are both strange, somewhat ritualistic, and pointless.”

“Could be,” Remiel nodded. “One question, what is another time dimension?”

“I’m not sure.” Jerome admitted. “I know time is different in the Stygian and Third plane though, meaning time isn’t a constant, possibly even in our world. I sorta have a theory; if someone attempted to alter time in order to commit a crime and it backfired on them, sending them into a different timeline or time stream or time dimension, maybe they can only be seen in our time as a shadow. The gang can’t tell anyone, because it’s a time spell and forbidden, plus they were committing a crime when it happened, so they are now doing their best to get the person back, but they don’t know what they are doing and they don’t have enough magic, even with five of them to accomplish it, so they continue to commit crimes to fund whatever they were trying to fund when they started committing the crimes, while also searching for a way to return the person, so the person follows the gang around.”

“You have a truly amazing brain,” Remiel told him. Jerome smiled.

“If that’s the case, we need to find a crime when the gang had six and see if that gives us any clues as to who is missing, as well as checking missing persons.” I said.

“I will call in some favors at the St. Louis police department,” Remiel said digging out his phone. I wasn’t sure if he were going to see what he could learn about crimes committed by gangs of six people or about the missing persons files. I did the unimaginable, I dug out my cell phone and called the school, leaving a message that Jerome would not be at school Monday. If the kid needed to use the AESPCA library, he was not going to make it to school. It had taken me three hours to exit the one time I had gone. Jerome raised an eyebrow as I left the message. I held up a hand for him to wait. Once I was finished, I explained about the possession alarm in the library and the general suspicion of anyone using the library and how I suspected even with the carmucci, we’d end up being there forever, possibly under interrogation. I then remembered Magda’s coded text and opened the key file. Her text message said that I was to contact her on a special phone and gave the number. It also gave me the ability to use the same code to reply to her text. I used the cipher encryption system and told her, Jerome and I would be visiting the library tomorrow and that Jerome had a pretty good theory about what was going on. Remiel hung up the phone and looked at Jerome and me. He sighed heavily.

“We can get in to look at the missing persons files, but we have to go to their central records, and we can’t get in until tomorrow. They recommended we use the amateur contact website Help Find Us. My contact said they do a decent job of keeping it up to date and while it won’t have all the missing persons of St. Louis, it will have a large portion of them, because they recommend families of missing persons use it. They are also going to find all robberies or thefts, where a gang of suspects were involved and is still unsolved. But it might be Tuesday before that’s ready.” Remiel said.

“Then to the living room, we’ll hook up the computer to the TV in there, so we can all see it,” Jerome said.

“Nah,” Remiel shook his head. “I have a better idea. Why don’t we install a TV in here? That way we can still access the crime wall.”

“I don’t have another TV. There’s the one in the living room and one in Jerome’s game room, but that’s it.” I said.

“Well, it’s almost Easter, just consider it a gift from the Easter Bunny,” Remiel stood. “I’ll be back in twenty minutes.” He stretched his wings, walked into the living room, and flew away.

“A TV from Remiel is a hell of an Easter Basket, he has a 90 inch in his living room.” Jerome said.

“Yes, but it will probably be a practical TV, it’s not going in his house, it’s going in mine.” I said and realized how stupid that sounded. I felt a 32 inch would be big enough but knowing my uncle it would be a 43 inch or something. “I hope he remembers to get a wall mount.”

It took Remiel twenty-seven minutes to return. He had three bags from the electronics store hooked to his pants via a piece of rope run through the belt loops on his jeans and a 55-inch TV in his arms. I tried to remind myself that in Remiel’s life a 55-inch TV was probably a hardship. He had remembered the wall mount, along with some other stuff, including a doohickey that would wirelessly cast my laptop screen to the TV. I didn’t even know they made such things. We spent fifty minutes getting it all set up. Then Remiel took another break to order a very late lunch that might have doubled as dinner if Jerome hadn’t been growing like a weed. However, it was three in the afternoon, I’d have to feed him before sending him to bed. Remiel returned several minutes later, grinning.

“What?” I asked him as Jerome got the website going for us.

“I ordered Italian from the Romance Room Bistro. I ordered you a large pasta loaded with bacon, mushrooms, broccoli, had them make it with penne, and smothered it in extra white sauce. I also ordered an entire loaf of garlic bread, got Jerome a meal for now and added a meal for later, as long as he’s willing to eat lobster pasta for lunch and lasagna for dinner. Oh, and to ensure you didn’t feel left out, I had them add lobster to your veggie pasta dish. It cost me extra, but it was probably worth it.” Remiel replied. “Now, let’s check out these missing persons. It will be an hour or so before it arrives.”